Advanced Portfolio Pitch and Audience Feedback

I created a pitch discussing and explaining my planned docmentary. This pitch included how my documentary will look, my survey feedback, the equipment I will use and the purpose and idea behind the documentary. The audience then gave me feedback and suggestions on my pitch and documentary.

The Documentary Pitch from JCRstudent

Audience Feedback

My audience research has been mainly positive. The angle of "humanising immigration" was highlighted as being a strong part of the pitch. Most feedback points towards the interviews being the most important part of the documentary. In terms of suggestions of improvement I have taken into consideration the inclusion of music (Which I missed out of the initial pitch) and the use of a two camera interview setup to have more options when editing my footage.